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Sunday, December 22, 2019

When I don’t feel proud of this poem

When I don’t feel proud of this poem
This intentional ordering of words shone 
As inadequate
Faulty
Close but not quite
Arching hastily 
Indulgent, melancholy
Poor, proud, or a condescending didactic rant

When I don’t feel proud of this poem
At least I tried
I wrote for me, and I released 
You can judge as you please

When I don’t feel proud of this poem
I will keep writing
Fighting 
Trusting 
Words, from the deep, incubated and born from me will keep 
Coming 
Learning to walk and hastening
To whom ever they’re supposed to reach